Je déteste.
By: BobHumphrey Jr.

Chapter: 01.

Started on: 02/07/10
Status: On going.
Genre: Idk. :D

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Prologue:

Je ne t'aime pas.
Je te deteste.
Je n'aime pas le facon que tu manges, le facon tu bouges.
Le facon tu parles est tres ennuyeux.

Pourquoi, tout le monde t'aime?



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WILL BE UPDATED INFREQUENTLY DUE TO STRESS CAUSED BY SCHOOL ETC.
Um. I wanted to improve my french.
-read the rules- I didn't see nothing about 'Only English', so here it is.

Note: I don't like accents. ):

cnc please.

Well.. although there isn't a rule on "English Only," I think it would be better if you just wrote english. Personally, I'm not that great at reading french and knowing its meaning. I think your idea is really unique, I really do but... eh, I wish I could actually read it. I can only comprehend a certain amount of french but hey, I'm improving myself because I take it in highschool.

x: . Well, I just wanted to post it somewhere so later on I can look back and look at (Laugh at) how bad I was before. Sicne I was on here at the moment I figured why not just upload it here?

If you want me to remove it, I will.


Thanks for thinking my idea is unique? You can improve, just practice practice. x: .

YO NO HABLO FRANCES. YO HABLO ESPANOL!~

But I'm sure it's a lovely prologue :3

Chapter 1: Avant.

Avant que tu arrives, tout la monde m'adore.

Tout la monde sont influencer par les petite mouvements des mes mains.

"Ah, je suis tres fatigue." Je dirais.

Les murmurs etait tres fort, je peux reppeler. "Qui va l'aider cette fois?"

Ils ont decide par des intenses regards.

Ils toujours etaient un petite personne qui, a la dernier moment, l'aide moi.

"Err." ils murmur. "Je peux truquer une lettre pour tu de sauter classe." Je peux voir, que ils sont nerveux.

Je souriais, et dit, "Merci beaucoup."

Je sais que tous les personnes ne m'aime, mais ils savent je peux leur rendre la vie miserable. Si je veux.

Ils ne savent pas. Que tous ce que je voulais etait des amis.

Mais j'etais bien avec ca, aussi.

Je voudrais me tromper en pensant que j'avais des amis. Des amis vraies.

Des amis que j'ai pu garder pour toujours, sans une autre pensee.

Je me trompais.

Il n'est pas suprenant, que je me trompais.

La moment ou tu es entre dans ma vie, je sais que je me trompais.


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Commentaire: Yes, I know it's short, but my vocabulary in french ain't that big. :3 In a way, it's like a longer version of the prologue. ohwell. :3

I feel so proud of this. I used hardly any google translate. or word reference. Only the french conjugator.

O_O..
i dont speak french..so..like..
BYE

Jenn: Ooh espanol~ :3 I want to learn it too, but I'm too stupide to learn 3 different languages at once. :3 (four if you count english?)

victoria: bb, o-o;

Can kinda understand the prologue. The rest.. Well, I'll read it when I can understand French well enough ^^;.. I'll try translating ;w;? *is using a translator on the words I don't know LOL D:*
Prologue:
I don't like you.
I hate you.
I don't like the way you eat, [or] the way you move.
The way you talk is very tedious [complicated?].
Why, [does?] everyone like you?

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The little stuffs in the brackets = little add-ons that could probably help make the phrase more coherent..?..

Wait, do you mind if I'm translating? o.o

Edit: Oh yea, and the title is "I hate".

There goes my originality for doing it in French. -rips apart Quatre saisons-.

Reimi: I don't mind if you translate it; in fact, I was planning on doing it myself, until I looked at your post. :3 --> Are you just translating my prologue? Or are you going to translate everything?

EDIT: -reads over your post again-. Oh, okay. Have fun practicing your french~ It's hard. :c You can do eet though.


Billy Goat: D': . Don't rip it up, your story is better than mine anyway. It's interesting. .

YEY. *is actually somewhat learning it c:* It gives me something to do. Question, do you speak french as your first language?

@Sue: well.. You can always do it in Dutch/some other language c:?

Reimi: Canto is my first language. Followed by English. then French. Haha, yeah I'm a language freak.

(Is planning to learn Japanese, Spanish, and Italian.)

Chapter 2: Je t'ai rencontré

La moment que tu arrives, je savais que ma vie allait changer completement.

Quand tu entre dans la salle de classe, tous les etudiants arrete de parler, et ils se congelent en place.

C'etait comme Dieu a fait tout le monde arrete de parler.

Tu as eu un grand sourire sur votre visage. Tes yeux, sont brillant. Comme le soliel, je peux repeller.

Quand tu fais un signe de la main, il etait comme Dieu a laisse les personnes dans la classe bouge.

Tous les etudiants dans la classe courit a toi. Je peux ecouter les cris.

"Comment t'appelles-tu?" Un etudiant cri.

"Je veux etre votre ami--" Dit un autre edtuiant.

"J'aime tes bijoux" Dit encore, un autre etudiant.

J'ai un sensation etrange a cette moment. Apres un moment, je me rends compte que c'etait la colere.

Je cri, "Asseyez-vous!"

Je sens que mes mains sont des poings.

Je peux voir l'effrayes visages, et je sourire.

Meme si je n'aime pas leur fronce des sourcils, je sais que... cette person va l'emporter. Mon coeur se serre, quand je sourire d'un petite sourire.

Mieux apprecier mes 'amis', avant que cette... Personne l'emporter.

Tu marches vers moi. Puis, tu dis, avec la meme grande sourire sur ton visage.

"Soyons amis!" Tu dit.

Je suis en colere.

LOL OMG JE COMPRADE ouo. Je suis tres hereux or however you spell it. It doesn't matter.

EAR WAX COMBINED WITH TOE JAM. :c : Of course you understand; LOL. We've been learning french for the same amount of time, and our French is like Grade 1 level. :c Actually I think it's worse cuz we don't understand past tense, imperfect tense and all that. I mastered that (in english) in like grade 1. So yeah, we're like preschool. :D

-Note: I used a whole lot of google translate in Chapter 2. Because I ran out of ideas. and didn't want to think. :3

Reimi wrote:YEY. *is actually somewhat learning it c:* It gives me something to do. Question, do you speak french as your first language?

@Sue: well.. You can always do it in Dutch/some other language c:?

I give up f3. Never will there be originality. And French is a language easier understood. You understand "J'adore" faster then "Ik hou van jou" because it's commonly used even in America. And Dutch sounds horrible.

-gives up writing-

^NUU YOU MUSTN'T D:
;A; I barley understand french LOL And i've been learning for like how long? a year and a half?

lol, I gave up on it in HS

im dropping it the second this year ends need to learn something I will use

haha i think its cool that yur writing a story in french but it'd be kinda nice if you would translate it too ? lol but its alright if you dont want to